At first, I said that I will focus on the relationship between justice and ethnicity, and how these two are related to the way people think. However, considering the amount of time left for us to complete the assignment, I thought the topic I have stated earlier would be too broad and therefore, impossible to complete it on time. So, I have narrowed down my essay topic and revised my thesis statement as follows: America seems to be thinking that what they are doing to the other countries for instance Afghanistan America
And my three main supporting ideas for this essay would be as follows…….
My first supporting idea would be that countries like Iraq, although they have been receiving the aids from US, are still under disorder and what is making it worse is that not only American soldiers are being killed, but the citizens of that country also.
My second supporting idea would be the tragedy of 9/11 that has happened almost ten years ago at US. If the Islamic people were really appreciating the aids from US, would they have done such a thing?
My third supporting idea would be that with over six billion of people living in this world, a belief of justice a single race is holding would not be the justice for all the others. In other words, the justice for US does not make the justice for the world.
Using the three main supporting ideas above, I would like to claim that what is being called an American justice might be a justice for some part, but that does not make it justice for all the others.
So let me get this straight. You're saying..
返信削除The sense of justice that underlies the military inventions by the USA in middle eastern countries is invalid because 1) the interventions do not produce better conditions for the people in those countries, 2) attacks and other actions by people of those countries against the USA show they do not accept justice as defined by the USA, and 3) no single society with its individual culture can define the concept of justice for other cultures.
Am I understanding you correctly? If this way of expressing your thesis together with your supporting points is to your liking, then please use it to present your thesis at or near the end of your introduction paragraph.